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Picking Flowers
You'll find me in a meadow,
Blooming all alone...
If you choose to pluck me,
You better take me home...
Put me in some water,
Then see how fast I grow...
But if you choose to toss me,
I guess you'll never know...
Blooming all alone...
If you choose to pluck me,
You better take me home...
Put me in some water,
Then see how fast I grow...
But if you choose to toss me,
I guess you'll never know...
Published 22nd Mar 2011
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22nd Mar 2011 8:33pm
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23rd Mar 2011 6:53pm
23rd Mar 2011 8:15pm
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2011 10:01pm
It's beautiful! I love the rhythm and simple rhyme, that weaves such an intimate tale.
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15th Jun 2012 4:37pm
16th May 2013 4:13am
very good! too much ... ... ... only flaw still a good flow and emotional tempo. keep grindin
