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Aphrodite Eyes
eyes closed, I sink into myself
so there are no distractions
as I take in evocative images
of you in my mind
your head lay nestled on my chest
as gentle fingers stroke the depth
of your raven hair
keeping our demons at bay
if only for a short time
we talk of closely guarded secrets
briefly losing our breath
in interludes of laughter
delving into each others hearts
forging esoteric bonds
although I may never know
the warmth of your angelic embrace
and what I can only imagine
to be the euphoric silken press
of your entrancing lips
I will always enjoy
our playful conversations
and the astute ink
you disperse so elegantly
exposing intriguing glimpses
into a unique heart
usually leaving me in awe
with the incredible view
through those Aphrodite eyes
-to katja
so there are no distractions
as I take in evocative images
of you in my mind
your head lay nestled on my chest
as gentle fingers stroke the depth
of your raven hair
keeping our demons at bay
if only for a short time
we talk of closely guarded secrets
briefly losing our breath
in interludes of laughter
delving into each others hearts
forging esoteric bonds
although I may never know
the warmth of your angelic embrace
and what I can only imagine
to be the euphoric silken press
of your entrancing lips
I will always enjoy
our playful conversations
and the astute ink
you disperse so elegantly
exposing intriguing glimpses
into a unique heart
usually leaving me in awe
with the incredible view
through those Aphrodite eyes
-to katja
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 15th May 2014
| Edited 16th May 2014
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Re: Aphrodite Eyes
Anonymous
15th May 2014 9:36am
Simply amazing serenade!
Much admired
Much admired
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15th May 2014 9:45am
i have so much respect for your writing process and how much thought and care you put into each syllable.
you humble me beyond words, Ed. thank you xo
you humble me beyond words, Ed. thank you xo
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Thank you for reading, and the very kind words my dear, I'm glad you liked...
It is my pleasure...
It is my pleasure...
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15th May 2014 5:07pm
You write really well, Fen.
This is just so well executed,
I like it a lot...
This is just so well executed,
I like it a lot...
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16th May 2014 9:32am
squeeeeee! you read it!
>insert goofy grin here<
i confess, i'm a sucker for that voice.
>insert goofy grin here<
i confess, i'm a sucker for that voice.
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21st May 2014 8:37pm
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Re: Aphrodite Eyes
29th May 2014 5:18am
your write is gallant & noble, spoken as a man who appreciates a certain captivating woman...
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29th May 2014 9:09am
Thanks a lot sir, for your visit and always evocative observations =)...
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