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'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
Though never destined to be
he can still remember when
her sugar had him sauced
in nanoseconds
that sweet cream
oozes from the soul
one would reckon
so it's no wonder
once more he's gotta yearning to feel
that magic of her silky smooth honey love
alive, within his internals
she'll always be his baby girl,
that tenderly sweet, sweet angel
who fell from up above...
he can still remember when
her sugar had him sauced
in nanoseconds
that sweet cream
oozes from the soul
one would reckon
so it's no wonder
once more he's gotta yearning to feel
that magic of her silky smooth honey love
alive, within his internals
she'll always be his baby girl,
that tenderly sweet, sweet angel
who fell from up above...
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Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 3:38pm
"she'll always be his baby girl"
^^^^
yeah, i'm a sucker for that line.
this was gorgeous Papi, the perfect mix of tender and sexy as fuck xo much enjoyed.
^^^^
yeah, i'm a sucker for that line.
this was gorgeous Papi, the perfect mix of tender and sexy as fuck xo much enjoyed.
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re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 5:44pm
Aaaawwww sweet mami, n I'm a sucker
for your sweet heart! Thank you sooooo much
for the RL add n your support always :)
for your sweet heart! Thank you sooooo much
for the RL add n your support always :)
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 3:47pm
re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 5:45pm
Thank you my dear lady, you're far too sweet
for words :) appreciate you much
for words :) appreciate you much
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 4:56pm
Enjoyed this read Mr. Poet :) delivering ink with remembrance's kiss and the past's yearning.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
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re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
15th May 2014 00:05am
Yea...like that. Thank u my sweetness I'm truly
n always grateful for ur continued support :)
n always grateful for ur continued support :)
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
14th May 2014 8:33pm
So lively and sexy, Poe, love the last 2 lines most since the image of a fallen angel is always so sensual :-).
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re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
15th May 2014 00:06am
That u like any of it is good enough for me my dear. Thank you
so much always! :)
so much always! :)
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Anonymous
15th May 2014 1:21am
What a beautiful write showing the grace of luv. Excellent sensual and sexy write of respect. Luv it! Xo :)
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re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
15th May 2014 2:55pm
Thank you flower, you make my face 'bloom' with smiles :)
Appreciate ur support always!
Appreciate ur support always!
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
15th May 2014 12:23pm
re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
15th May 2014 2:56pm
Aaawwww why thank u my dear! Truly grateful n pleased u found this as such :)
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15th May 2014 1:45pm
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15th May 2014 2:57pm
BR! wow, I haven't heard from u in a bit... Hope all is well n I truly thank u n appreciate ur support :)
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
16th May 2014 3:58am
...that last stanza was indeed the soft frame for this lovely picture! Enjoyed, Poe....Xo
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16th May 2014 4:47pm
Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
16th May 2014 7:55pm
Great picture you painted Bro. PK!!!
A Righteous write Bro.!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
A Righteous write Bro.!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: 'Incessant, Thy Hunger...'
17th May 2014 12:13pm
Thanks Lance truly appreciate your support
n really happy you enjoyed my ink :)
n really happy you enjoyed my ink :)