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an andante life
nowhere to go
somewhere i'm heading
drift on the flow
reach for a zenith
no shit beside me
nothing above
memories behind me
stories lacking love
endless walking
looking ahead
no more talking
the things i said
do just do
stimulate
no time to lose
unhesitate
find a life
find a muse
fly a kite
speak the truth
contented peace
capacity soul
breathing deep
growing old
zigging zagging
spending time
dying happy
lived a life.
somewhere i'm heading
drift on the flow
reach for a zenith
no shit beside me
nothing above
memories behind me
stories lacking love
endless walking
looking ahead
no more talking
the things i said
do just do
stimulate
no time to lose
unhesitate
find a life
find a muse
fly a kite
speak the truth
contented peace
capacity soul
breathing deep
growing old
zigging zagging
spending time
dying happy
lived a life.
Published 22nd Mar 2011
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23rd Mar 2011 9:26pm
and it moved quickly from "do just do" with your short lines and the alliteration. nice images and you paced the tempo of how life goes for us, starting slow and time seems to go by faster as we age. good show, mate. [:
24th Mar 2011 6:07pm
yeah, nice, i didn't really think about the pace, that's just how some of my stuff comes out. innit.
nice one, cheers.
nice one, cheers.
