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I'm weak
I can almost feel your
kiss, but there's nothing
there, a phantom shadow
Wanting to be in me as
much as I want to feel
you deep within me
My own hands touching
the spots I've imagined
you to be and I'm weak
Published 9th May 2014
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9th May 2014 7:28pm
There's just no fabrication that we can conjure to match that feeling and all of it's awesome sensory elements...the soft warm touch, the thrilling sounds and oh the scents!
You've captured that longing well. Brava Tommie!
You've captured that longing well. Brava Tommie!
9th May 2014 7:32pm
You're so right GW. Thank you very much for comment. I always enjoy when you stop by. ;)
9th May 2014 11:45pm
It's a very sensual write. I feel the longing in your words and the desire in your heart. Good write.
10th May 2014 00:02am
10th May 2014 3:13am
like in work
one needs a sabbatical
so also in sex
take time off
it seems to have becum too much
of a routine
be sexless for a while
rejuvenate
may be
one needs a sabbatical
so also in sex
take time off
it seems to have becum too much
of a routine
be sexless for a while
rejuvenate
may be
10th May 2014 11:26pm
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