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Prices for Vices
Crimson iron runs
Now coated in liquid salt
My life becomes rust
Now coated in liquid salt
My life becomes rust
Published 4th May 2014
| Edited 14th May 2014
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4th May 2014 4:15pm
4th May 2014 11:34pm
and the gold star goes to Jakki.
those 12 year old have nothing on your intellect sir.
those 12 year old have nothing on your intellect sir.
13th May 2014 5:07pm
not sure if that was facetious but I'll take it.
It was quite an eloquent metaphor
It was quite an eloquent metaphor
5th May 2014 1:10am
Crimson iron...very nice...love the way you have linked it all together.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
Anonymous
5th May 2014 9:00pm
Touching piece,of a bleeding blade
