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sugar coatings and robust seasonings
applied to nightmares that were worth dreaming.
They seemed so delicious at the time,
that you weren't at all suspicious of the fact
that they didn't exist outside your mind.
And that your heart is just as hungry
as it was before you closed your eyes
last night.
Your heart has yet to find
something tangible to keep itself in line.
A direction to deem north.
Something pure and positive to pine.
The hunger pangs echo into eternity
as you keep encountering nothing
but anomalies the whole way.
They seemed so delicious at the time,
that you weren't at all suspicious of the fact
that they didn't exist outside your mind.
And that your heart is just as hungry
as it was before you closed your eyes
last night.
Your heart has yet to find
something tangible to keep itself in line.
A direction to deem north.
Something pure and positive to pine.
The hunger pangs echo into eternity
as you keep encountering nothing
but anomalies the whole way.
Published 2nd May 2014
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2nd May 2014 8:41pm
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4th May 2014 6:38pm
27th May 2014 4:55am
..."that you weren't at all suspicious of the fact
that they didn't exist outside your mind"...
"Your heart had yet to find"
"A direction to deem north"
This poem flows so eloquently,
Each line has my mind turn another direction.
Well done.
that they didn't exist outside your mind"...
"Your heart had yet to find"
"A direction to deem north"
This poem flows so eloquently,
Each line has my mind turn another direction.
Well done.
27th May 2014 1:59pm
Again... much appreciated... considering how consistently ineloquent I can be.
27th May 2014 6:17pm
