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The Son I Never Had
I watched you germinate
Felt Her belly as you kicked
Then came Your first appearance
We all cried together
My toungue tingled when I first called you..'son'
Our baby became a boy
And I'll never forget your favourite colour..blue..
I wipe my tears and wish this was all true
Felt Her belly as you kicked
Then came Your first appearance
We all cried together
My toungue tingled when I first called you..'son'
Our baby became a boy
And I'll never forget your favourite colour..blue..
I wipe my tears and wish this was all true
Published 1st May 2014
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1st May 2014 10:16pm
2nd May 2014 10:34pm
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I like this, though thought it was a bit fragmented. Kinda read like you was going for that.. "less is more thing" But yeah, this was ok. Keep writin
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I like this, though thought it was a bit fragmented. Kinda read like you was going for that.. "less is more thing" But yeah, this was ok. Keep writin
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