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Suicide
2 nights ago I got a glimpse of Death
And smiled at the blissful sight
A sight that took away my breath
But seemed so very right
Last night I begged for Death to return
But my pleas were declined
I long for him so much it burns
Why do I feel so confined?
An answer to all my pleas
All my longings fufilled
To get away with such ease
The promises of a pistol are thrilled
So tonight I pull the trigger
And become something much bigger
And smiled at the blissful sight
A sight that took away my breath
But seemed so very right
Last night I begged for Death to return
But my pleas were declined
I long for him so much it burns
Why do I feel so confined?
An answer to all my pleas
All my longings fufilled
To get away with such ease
The promises of a pistol are thrilled
So tonight I pull the trigger
And become something much bigger
Published 16th Mar 2011
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17th Mar 2011 7:51pm
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9th Oct 2013 4:40pm
just curious is this meant to be in a sonnet form? also i like the poem, but I noticed that some of the lines seem to be much longer than that of others, and this could mess with the flow of the poem for some people, but i like it.
