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Shadows of Lies
The shadows of lies,
they can hear my cries.
My shattered soul,
stuck deep down in this hole.
Your blood sucking Demons,
leaving me screaming.
All these nights of endless torture,
is there no closure?
There claws of steel,
making me whimper and yield.
My spirt beaten and chained
God, they can't be tamed.
I keep pleading and grieving,
but what is it achieving?
Going numb, feeling hollow,
It's getting hard to swallow.
Blurry vision, ragged breathing,
your smile so deceiving.
My trembling soul,
why can't I let go.
Slowly closing my eyes,
I think it's time to say our goodbyes.
they can hear my cries.
My shattered soul,
stuck deep down in this hole.
Your blood sucking Demons,
leaving me screaming.
All these nights of endless torture,
is there no closure?
There claws of steel,
making me whimper and yield.
My spirt beaten and chained
God, they can't be tamed.
I keep pleading and grieving,
but what is it achieving?
Going numb, feeling hollow,
It's getting hard to swallow.
Blurry vision, ragged breathing,
your smile so deceiving.
My trembling soul,
why can't I let go.
Slowly closing my eyes,
I think it's time to say our goodbyes.
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20th Apr 2014 9:00am
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20th Apr 2014 9:03am
Thank you! I just wrote from the heart to express my true colors. Glad you enjoyed it. Its very much appreciated!
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20th Apr 2014 9:51am
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20th Apr 2014 10:14pm
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20th Apr 2014 10:30pm
thank you! that means more than you think. i was kinda heart broken when i wrote this. i feel better knowing people read and liked this. ^-^
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22nd Apr 2014 00:45am
Romance turned into an all consuming road of destruction. A theme that seems to translate to all kinds of expression (movies, books, songs, etc)
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22nd Apr 2014 3:42am
great title for it also it reminds me of my past more than you know but still great job on it
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2014 4:40am
very heartfelt piece, good write.
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