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what you do.
you make me, you break m.. you love me you hate me.. you give me reason to live yet you make me want to die.. ill live for you once more, but all i can do is try..
Published 15th Mar 2011
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15th Mar 2011 9:04pm
15th Mar 2011 9:11pm
Thanks (: .. I don't quite remember wat I was feeling though when I wrote it.. (:
15th Mar 2011 9:12pm
i don't like to be harsh on new members...but this is just a string of clichés. one right after the other. no exceptions.
15th Mar 2011 9:15pm
None needed... this is freaking great!! (: the first bad comment I've gotten! (: I may be 13 but I'm not easily broken by words! (: thanks for being honest!
15th Mar 2011 9:17pm
15th Mar 2011 9:20pm
Im young and kinda new to the site, so yea, I need critique, good or bad as long as its honest I don't care (:
