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Accidentally..
I never knew how Feelings could melt..
Concentrate an Elixir then flow from your Mind dripping into your Soul like words off felt.
Washing away Rational thought tiding waves,
Subconscious Submission becoming their slave.
Confused for days off feelings you gave,
thoughts Unspoken but they weren't chosen
..I could almost swear planted or Telepathic.
But thats just me trippin' playing the Cinnamon Smooth notes of your skin with my fingertips...
Shackled & Chained to the taste of your Lips.
Sugahbabe, you pierced my Innocence spilling Passion with a blade.
I've laid half my day away sleep walking up Fantasy Lane
..Waiting to watch you pass by then call my name!
Concentrate an Elixir then flow from your Mind dripping into your Soul like words off felt.
Washing away Rational thought tiding waves,
Subconscious Submission becoming their slave.
Confused for days off feelings you gave,
thoughts Unspoken but they weren't chosen
..I could almost swear planted or Telepathic.
But thats just me trippin' playing the Cinnamon Smooth notes of your skin with my fingertips...
Shackled & Chained to the taste of your Lips.
Sugahbabe, you pierced my Innocence spilling Passion with a blade.
I've laid half my day away sleep walking up Fantasy Lane
..Waiting to watch you pass by then call my name!
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Re: Accidentally..
14th Apr 2014 00:41am
Mmmmm......this is so melodic, I could arrange a soundtrack for this. Liking this very much
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re: Re: Accidentally..
14th Apr 2014 8:51pm
Awww I'd be honored my words could orchestrate a soundtrack! You have my permission feel free=). Thank you for liking!
Re: Accidentally..
14th Apr 2014 6:57pm
Washing away Rational thought- Awesome sweets!!
Love the creativity in this piece!!
I agree with Bro. M, Melodic!!!
Great read Ma!!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the creativity in this piece!!
I agree with Bro. M, Melodic!!!
Great read Ma!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Accidentally..
14th Apr 2014 9:00pm
Appreciate the love Lance! I enjoyed writing this one, Thankk Yoouu=)!
Re: Accidentally..
14th Apr 2014 9:14pm
My fav lines "Confused for days off feelings you gave,
thoughts Unspoken but they weren't chosen
..I could almost swear planted or Telepathic." ...unspoken, unhindered, and unabashed! Love this!
thoughts Unspoken but they weren't chosen
..I could almost swear planted or Telepathic." ...unspoken, unhindered, and unabashed! Love this!
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re: Re: Accidentally..
15th Apr 2014 6:16am
Why thank you so much for loving my words. It's appreciated Miss=)! Ha I've always loved the word unabashed, exactly what i was going for!!
Re: Accidentally..
15th Apr 2014 8:43am
your poem is a sexual adventure. lovers finding each other by accident...
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16th Apr 2014 6:27am
Re: Accidentally..
15th Apr 2014 10:30am
thank u for subscribing and this line is jusss beauty
....''''Shackled & Chained
to the taste of your Lips.
Sugahbabe,
you pierced=========
my Innocence
spilling
Passion with (a )
ur blade.
....''''Shackled & Chained
to the taste of your Lips.
Sugahbabe,
you pierced=========
my Innocence
spilling
Passion with (a )
ur blade.
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re: Re: Accidentally..
16th Apr 2014 6:29am
No problem, i actually thought i did but didn't aha!
Appreciate that again=)!!
Appreciate that again=)!!
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16th Apr 2014 7:05am
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25th Apr 2014 1:33am
Awwww Thank You So Muchh! You brought a smile to my face. Delighted i can bring rhythm through letters composed as words=)!!
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