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my veins are sick
dopesick, I am tangling
bedsheets,
withdrawing;
icy sweat drying on
my skin
like so many
memories of you.
{…and still I sweat
icicles.}
bedsheets,
withdrawing;
icy sweat drying on
my skin
like so many
memories of you.
{…and still I sweat
icicles.}
Published 11th Apr 2014
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15th Apr 2014 8:16pm
hey there miss
while its obvious that ur goin thru some bad shit, this really dont do done that much for me. more theatrics and more ideas will make for a better poem, at least to me.
while its obvious that ur goin thru some bad shit, this really dont do done that much for me. more theatrics and more ideas will make for a better poem, at least to me.
6th May 2014 7:12pm
You should have elaborated more but I still enjoyed reading it. It paints a picture and beings back memories to me
2nd Jun 2020 8:52pm
When you it so bad that you break out in a cold sweat...
James Brown made a whole routine for a song bout havn something get so far in your soul that all you want is that one thing
James Brown made a whole routine for a song bout havn something get so far in your soul that all you want is that one thing
