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Everything
Bend you over the soft fabric
Strap you down
Place my knee on your back
my hand between you shoulders
my leg between yours.
It slices through the air
the sting of the wood across your ass.
You hold your breath.
Cry out in pain.
Tears I want,
obedient I want,
submissiveness I want.
I want everything.
Strap you down
Place my knee on your back
my hand between you shoulders
my leg between yours.
It slices through the air
the sting of the wood across your ass.
You hold your breath.
Cry out in pain.
Tears I want,
obedient I want,
submissiveness I want.
I want everything.
Published 13th Mar 2011
| Edited 10th Apr 2011
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14th Mar 2011 1:59am
Not my thing.. I don't get what you are getting at.. I mean it's sex but why are you putting your knee on his back.. I'm sorry I just don't feel it but I'm no expert n I'm not perfect some of my work sucks so whatever you feel if it's right for you then go for it.. It's your idea so there is no wrong or right
14th Mar 2011 4:47am
yes not my best. I am much better at the story writing. It is more of a S&M piece, the knee to keep your submissive in place. My sub is a she. My erotic work is mostly lesbian S&M. If you have questions about the bondage part I will gladly answer.
14th Mar 2011 5:04am
O ok I see.. I know about s&m it's not my thing maybe that's why I didn't get lol
