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Candles...(Mental Burn pt.2)
".....because the lady should never burn alone "
My candle.....
...like an elegant, black-satin taper
hot wax drippin'
down upon your mahogany skin
burning deep into the soul
harm not the beautiful skin that you're in
...you ignite my flame
white like
a super-heated phosphorous fire
burning bright
such a *firm grip* upon my reality
broke out in a cold, cold sweat
you give me fever; I hold on tight...
“...my hands on your hips, pull you right back to me
you catch my thrust, give it right back to me
I'm in so deep, you're breathing for me
I grab your locks, arch your back high for me
I'm a diesel engine, you're squirtin' mad oil
down on the floor till the speakers start to boil
You flip shit, quick slip, hip dip...you're twisted
in my hands and my lips and my tongue tricks
I'm so hard
and you're so thick.......
…...Crown Royal on Ice...”
my heart beats and my rich vein throbs
my mouth drips, sexy hands twist knobs
you turn me up, I feel so high
fuel injected passion, raging gasoline fire
“....ridin' out her perfect storm
creamy lava landing on her skin and neck
blending into her all day, Coach Legacy scent
This *freakin'* is so incredulous, decadent.....”
Burnin' me like an impassioned gasoline dream
got my body in a deep erotic trance
Her love is the only thing
that keeps me breathing,
my flickering flame dancing...
…...my candle,
smoldering wick burning low,
increasing it's lofty flow
flaming embers deep inside her “love below”
scattered ashes as this warm tempest blows
“This fire we make”, consuming the soul
yet harming not that beautiful mahogany skin you're in.....
( inspired by Rain's "Mental Burn" and the musical stylings of Jill Scott..."Epiphany" and "Crown Royal On Ice" You weren't alone when the dam burst....)
Published 9th Apr 2014
| Edited 11th Apr 2014
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9th Apr 2014 9:27pm
9th Apr 2014 9:40pm
10th Apr 2014 4:35am
...that pic alone has my mind burning.smh..*you ain't right!* Who freek'N-who? :)
Glad I could inspire such a lava-hot piece from you luv...Xo
Glad I could inspire such a lava-hot piece from you luv...Xo
.....I told you I was there *playing* with you >:p~~. I thought the art was very appropriate Ms. Rain. Mutually satisfying, no denying
Thank you love for the comment xoxoxo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msTgsF78Ej4 Crown Royal on Ice
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MS8BgRfvjg Epiphany
Thank you love for the comment xoxoxo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=msTgsF78Ej4 Crown Royal on Ice
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MS8BgRfvjg Epiphany
10th Apr 2014 5:16am
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10th Apr 2014 8:44am
All your erotic poetry affects me in just the right way and this piece is no different....... I really can't imagine not having your steamy erotic poems in my life, so here is a big thank you from a great fan and admirer of yours.... ;)
10th Apr 2014 11:58am
Thank you Scarlet. : ) The admiration is mutual.....I always look for that flower icon when I publish something new.....
12th Apr 2014 7:31am
"fuel injected passion, raging gasoline fire" whew! somebody better call the firetrucks cause this ink is smoking Hot!! vivid and beautifully crafted..Bravo Mr M!! enjoyed
12th Apr 2014 3:32pm
Again I thank you for you most welcome comments...deep, beautiful intimacy is a heady accelerant all it's own
My dear...you are truly on a level all your own...very unique indeed...
Your works are amongst the greatest my eyes have ever seen..
Your words are like a flourishing virgin seed...
Growing more intense with every drip drip drip of her delicious rain...
Much props to whomever is your inspiration...
Lol I'm gonna need y'all to continue doing whatever y'all doing...for the sole benefits of my literary satisfaction... :-)
Thank you...now nevermind me...get back to work pls...
Your works are amongst the greatest my eyes have ever seen..
Your words are like a flourishing virgin seed...
Growing more intense with every drip drip drip of her delicious rain...
Much props to whomever is your inspiration...
Lol I'm gonna need y'all to continue doing whatever y'all doing...for the sole benefits of my literary satisfaction... :-)
Thank you...now nevermind me...get back to work pls...
5th May 2014 1:56am
Thank you Natty D : ) I am humbled by your comment.
-----> "...your words are like a flourishing virgin seed..."
Warms my heart and inspires : )
-----> "...your words are like a flourishing virgin seed..."
Warms my heart and inspires : )
