deepundergroundpoetry.com
Uncle
Uncle
I'll hide
survive
closets sooth
old man's beard itches my neck
pinned and screaming I know it's going down
god the pain and yet
all I do is lay
numb and scared
no not scared
contempt
when the time cums
old man
you won't live longer than me
I'll hide
survive
closets sooth
old man's beard itches my neck
pinned and screaming I know it's going down
god the pain and yet
all I do is lay
numb and scared
no not scared
contempt
when the time cums
old man
you won't live longer than me
Published 7th Apr 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 2
comments 2
reads 841
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
8th Apr 2014 10:10pm
powerfull stuff......
i know i (maybe) shouldnt say this, but i hope to see the next poem in this long and terrible story line up here one day.
x
i know i (maybe) shouldnt say this, but i hope to see the next poem in this long and terrible story line up here one day.
x
15th May 2014 10:29pm
wow that was so beautifully written. i really respect a writer who can paint such a vivid picture in an indirect yet magical way.
