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TO MY BABY BROTHER (Beyond Crazy, competition submission)
I’m weary of your anger
I’m tired of your lament
Offended by everyone
No one escapes your judgment
You’ve grown into a cynic
With a dark depressing soul
Once you were a baby
Whose mother loved you so
Your heart has become hard
Your mind is so shallow
I must move away
From the darkness of your shadow
I’m tired of your lament
Offended by everyone
No one escapes your judgment
You’ve grown into a cynic
With a dark depressing soul
Once you were a baby
Whose mother loved you so
Your heart has become hard
Your mind is so shallow
I must move away
From the darkness of your shadow
Published 4th Apr 2014
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6th Apr 2014 5:56pm
short,and relatable. I have a younger brother. But really I can relate more to this piece personally.
6th Apr 2014 8:06pm
Thank you Fading2Black. Unbound cynicism not only destroys the soul, but inflicts pain upon all that are near. Especially to suffer, are those that love you.
1st Jul 2016 6:01pm
Ahh, dealing with those close to us that are not good for us...this is something I can relate to. Very nice write.
Willow
Willow
3rd Jul 2016 3:07am
