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YOU ARE SOO RIGHTX)

Id reply witha enraged response,
but the sleeze is right i gotta say.
Yeah ima loser straight up from the projects
alllll over,
live with ma grandparents
and suckkk the life righttt out of em,
i could not agree more with dis thing or watever she is,
and i dont necessarily wanna give the thing uh rise,
i fell inta some big ass depression for what..??
for that worthless pieca shit,
damn i am a dumbass loser, but its cool,
i can live with myself,
but in your writes and my personal observations
you could never go a day livin my life,
to stuck up and materialistic,
but hey im just repeatin shit u already know,
just like all ya fake poems;)
just like you baby..
take care now ya hear
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