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WOULD YOU MIND?
would you mind?
you and me
our feet in the warm sand
you and me
the sound of waves
you and me
drowning
just the two of us
would you mind?
you and me
our feet in the warm sand
you and me
the sound of waves
you and me
drowning
just the two of us
would you mind?
Published 1st Apr 2014
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4th Apr 2014 6:48am
...no, wouldn't mind at all....:)
Scenery of this ink is sexy as heck. I could feel the sand and hear the waves....Xo
Scenery of this ink is sexy as heck. I could feel the sand and hear the waves....Xo
4th Apr 2014 6:17pm
Anonymous
5th Apr 2014 4:37am
Very enchanting luv poem. Makes the imagination wander and heart to visualize. Enjoyed! :)
Anonymous
6th Apr 2014 2:57pm
Makes me think about the ritual with the flower, he loves me, he loves me not....
magical write
magical write
Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 00:31am
This awakens a longing... no, I wouldn't mind at all...
