deepundergroundpoetry.com
Soaring Above The Clouds
The gleam in his eyes that the sun put off showed
so much happiness and emotion but also free and
carlessness was spotted in his facial expression,
this boy was the happiest id ever saw him ina long time.
I had a great feeling inside from the happy positive energy
he put off,
that feeling was like the all the bad in the world had gone away and
everything from that day on was guna be perfect.
That boy was going somewhere in life being all he can be
and no one was guna stop him,
he was free taking all the pain i felt my whole life was all gone just like that.
The greatest day of my life was soaring above the clouds in my plane alone,
my daydream was me.
so much happiness and emotion but also free and
carlessness was spotted in his facial expression,
this boy was the happiest id ever saw him ina long time.
I had a great feeling inside from the happy positive energy
he put off,
that feeling was like the all the bad in the world had gone away and
everything from that day on was guna be perfect.
That boy was going somewhere in life being all he can be
and no one was guna stop him,
he was free taking all the pain i felt my whole life was all gone just like that.
The greatest day of my life was soaring above the clouds in my plane alone,
my daydream was me.
Published 11th Mar 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 1
reads 1308
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
23rd Aug 2011 7:46pm
