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Stop...

This is one of those how true are you to you moments
Turn and look at your partner

Do they make you smile
stop
Did you hurry home today just because you knew they'd be home or did you find some other place to go first so contact would be kept to a minimum
stop
Were they in the same spot you left them in before you left for work this morning
stop
Is everything in your name
stop
Is going out always on you
stop
Have your friends stop coming around with no real explanation
stop
Has their rough around the edges charm changed to plain rudeness now
stop
Have you been told," why you trying to be so proper"?
stop
Have you ever heard damn, your girlfriend's hot...
I'm just saying
stop

Lets sum this up...
The sight of them doesn't make you happy
You'd rather be anyplace but with them
They work harder at not being productive than anything else
Everything the two of you share is really yours
They're rude and uneducated but most importantly
disrespectful

STOP...
IS THERE ANOTHER WORD I SHOULD BE USING
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