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I trace your cobalt veins
Your skin so cold
Like the harshest winter rains.
But still I hold you though you're long gone dead
I could care less
I just want to be fed
By your caress.
Your skin so cold
Like the harshest winter rains.
But still I hold you though you're long gone dead
I could care less
I just want to be fed
By your caress.
Published 25th Mar 2014
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25th Mar 2014 9:52pm
Striking language - with a cruel twist - don't think needs to be in over 18s - cool writings - welcome to DU
26th Mar 2014 7:34pm
Love this one. I'm with whale...it may be a bit disturbing, but I don't feel it should be age restricted. I would have loved this one at 16.
26th Mar 2014 7:47pm
Thanks to you both. I contacted a mod about having the age restriction taken off.
26th Mar 2014 8:08pm
c h i l l s!!!
A bit of a darker, almost double entendre side to lust....
(with regards to the rating.....probably would have been alright as un-restricted.Erring on the side of caution---invariably the wisest choice (or so it's stated. :) )
Intriguing Ink!
Glad to have with us, new-comer!
A bit of a darker, almost double entendre side to lust....
(with regards to the rating.....probably would have been alright as un-restricted.Erring on the side of caution---invariably the wisest choice (or so it's stated. :) )
Intriguing Ink!
Glad to have with us, new-comer!
26th Mar 2014 10:49pm
Great write. Looking forward to reading more from you and welcome to the site.
9th Jun 2014 6:39pm
The emptiness of a lost love bordering on necrophilia. Good imagination. Enjoyed.
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