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18th Mar 2014 8:45am
Ever thought I'd hear a genuinely angry sounding haiku, but you've done it.
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18th Mar 2014 10:36am
lol ... I've done angry before in my short pieces ...but I'm glad you enjoyed this one ...
Thanks for the read!
Thanks for the read!
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18th Mar 2014 9:53am
Short and to the point.
This is a nice public salute for certain situations.
I may use it on occasion, Thanks
This is a nice public salute for certain situations.
I may use it on occasion, Thanks
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18th Mar 2014 10:40am
Every now and then I get a little pissed with the "good government" - "socially responsible corporation" bullshit ... this is where I vent ... Thanks for the read and comment
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18th Mar 2014 2:19pm
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18th Mar 2014 3:44pm
My dad got me hooked into Johnny Cash when I was young ... I didn't realize how poignant and cutting his anti government songs were until I was older ...
... Thanks for the feedback xo
... Thanks for the feedback xo
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18th Mar 2014 8:24pm
Cleverly disguised disgust....
with just the right 'hint'
of kiss- my- bad- a**---attitude! :P
(LOL!) My sentiments, exactly!!
with just the right 'hint'
of kiss- my- bad- a**---attitude! :P
(LOL!) My sentiments, exactly!!
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18th Mar 2014 9:35pm
Yes - we all have to veil and disguise it at times but a day of reckoning is coming and the disguises will come off ...
Thank you Enchantress!
Thank you Enchantress!
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Anonymous
24th Mar 2014 1:17am
This is my first time reading an angry haiku, and I love it!
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24th Mar 2014 3:58am
As I've come to learn since joining this site ... traditional haiku is nature based, senryu reflects human sentiment ... Every now and then I'll write something that flirts with both ... Thanks for reading and commenting ... And subscribing.
And a belated welcome to DUP!
And a belated welcome to DUP!