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HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
With his dark wings
Carefully wrapped around her
She smiled
As she watched
His inferno fade
Looking at the new man
That arose from the ashes
She had always
Known his true color
For it was she
That replaced
The fire inside
Carefully wrapped around her
She smiled
As she watched
His inferno fade
Looking at the new man
That arose from the ashes
She had always
Known his true color
For it was she
That replaced
The fire inside
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Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
Anonymous
16th Mar 2014 9:11pm
Wow! Beautiful write of how luv changes the heart inside. Luv it! :)
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re: Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
21st Mar 2014 10:05pm
Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
16th Mar 2014 9:45pm
....someone that loves you deeply and completely, will always polish the gold in you....
I really love this one! Very nice, Chris...Xo
I really love this one! Very nice, Chris...Xo
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re: Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
21st Mar 2014 10:06pm
Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
16th Mar 2014 11:51pm
One of those descriptive reads that gives you so much and then leads the reader to unanswered questions with the last stanza.
A joy to read
A joy to read
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re: Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
21st Mar 2014 10:08pm
Wow... That's a very nice compliment, my friend! I'm speechless... So thank you!
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17th Mar 2014 7:18am
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Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
Anonymous
17th Mar 2014 9:22pm
Very nice, one of my favorites by you.
Mortal versus the immortal worlds, meeting in this poem.
Mortal versus the immortal worlds, meeting in this poem.
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re: Re: HER DARK ANGEL (as requested by Louis Cyphre himself)
21st Mar 2014 10:09pm