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Loving you is my destiny, my love is your felicity
Why loving you so strong
If we don't share our life?
Wonderful time and sad time?
Happiness and misfortune
I could not support the distance
I could not accept the silence
I need to receive all your sadness
I need to give my shoulder for your cry
Who am I for you if I am not with you
When you live sad events, hard while
Who I am for you if I am unable
To help you when you are so sad
Loving you is my destiny
My love is your felicity
Don't forget the strength
Of our incredible love
Published 16th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2014 2:32pm
Beautiful sentiment Malin, you've covered many unanswered questions in love and life. I like the simplicity of the structure as well.
Note: switch
Who i am ==>>> who am i
im sure its a typo...receive
Note: switch
Who i am ==>>> who am i
im sure its a typo...receive
16th Mar 2014 3:19pm
17th Mar 2014 4:22pm
The last two lines are my favorite -- loved the poem --
That is what love is all about-- sharing into each other's life experiences....... :) ♡♡♡
That is what love is all about-- sharing into each other's life experiences....... :) ♡♡♡
17th Mar 2014 4:27pm
