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now that wasn't long - senryu
back inside my box..
of sanity and structure..
safety for my pen..
of sanity and structure..
safety for my pen..
Published 12th Mar 2014
| Edited 18th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 2:38am
I can relate this. I think I'm on the edge of sanity most the time. :)
thanks fro finding the side of the box i live in. this was a hard write for me. i tried to twist to many images inside one haiku.
1..sanity (enough said)
2..inside (the place i dwell)
3..safety (the state i search for)
4..structure (6 walls to protect me)
5..structure of a senryu/haiku (5/7/5)
6..my addiction (my pen that bring me back)
1..sanity (enough said)
2..inside (the place i dwell)
3..safety (the state i search for)
4..structure (6 walls to protect me)
5..structure of a senryu/haiku (5/7/5)
6..my addiction (my pen that bring me back)
Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 1:39pm
Thank you so very much for the break down. Few words......big impact. Wonderful! :)
