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11th Mar 2014 11:44am
11th Mar 2014 10:16pm
I'm constantly changing from calm to hell
Madness fills my heart and soul
As if the great divide could swallow me whole
moving on is a bitch.
Madness fills my heart and soul
As if the great divide could swallow me whole
moving on is a bitch.
11th Mar 2014 10:19pm
"calm to hell ... moving on is a bitch" ... You've felt this wrath as well I see ...
... Thank you for the feedback ... It's much appreciated
... Thank you for the feedback ... It's much appreciated
[...] seething in frigid lust [...]
A powerful line, ruling the whole poem. An emotional senryu for sure!
A powerful line, ruling the whole poem. An emotional senryu for sure!
11th Mar 2014 10:22pm
It's a cold soul that cripples every fiber ... Thank you as always for your commentary Miss Chi
Salud
Salud
