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The fall
We all stumble
fumble
mumble
Lose, win
Try again
Stand up, sit down
Gain & lose ground
Hope
Hate
Anticipate
Love
Then shove
it away
Fall
stall
Forget
Then, remember
Hold on
Let go
Vain
Only for show
Humbled
crumble
struggle
juggle
Believe
cleave
Dam you Eve
Deceived
fumble
mumble
Lose, win
Try again
Stand up, sit down
Gain & lose ground
Hope
Hate
Anticipate
Love
Then shove
it away
Fall
stall
Forget
Then, remember
Hold on
Let go
Vain
Only for show
Humbled
crumble
struggle
juggle
Believe
cleave
Dam you Eve
Deceived
Published 10th Mar 2014
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10th Mar 2014 7:17am
You are fast becoming my favourite poet on DU.
Another sublime example of expressive meaning with few words; which I find always invokes more images and wonder, there is more space to imagine and play with.
The Eden reference was a nice touch.
Another sublime example of expressive meaning with few words; which I find always invokes more images and wonder, there is more space to imagine and play with.
The Eden reference was a nice touch.
11th Mar 2014 3:43am
Seriously appreciate your feed back on my work. Very kind of you to take the time to read and comment. Really made my heart feel good to have someone enjoy and understand my art. Thank you Embrace ★☆★☆★
18th Mar 2014 6:44pm
