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"DP" (part deux)
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One delegates
Two penetrate
Three detonate
Many propagate
Never hesitate
Want to replicate
Most will relate
Some relegate
But never hate
This to educate
You may emulate
Hope you celebrate
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*Point of reference: 'DP' is
Double Penetration, vaginal/anal*
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One delegates
Two penetrate
Three detonate
Many propagate
Never hesitate
Want to replicate
Most will relate
Some relegate
But never hate
This to educate
You may emulate
Hope you celebrate
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*Point of reference: 'DP' is
Double Penetration, vaginal/anal*
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Published 10th Mar 2014
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10th Mar 2014 3:14am
damn,i was hoping for the word ejaculate ;-)
in all seriousness it does draw me in which makes it more alluring.self-love directed?
in all seriousness it does draw me in which makes it more alluring.self-love directed?
10th Mar 2014 3:27am
:D LOL! Funny you would mention it.
When I originally wrote this, nearly two years ago, I replaced
'ejaculate' with "emulate" hoping the reader will match or surpass
this experience.
Having already used "detonate" in line three, it (ejaculate) seemed redundant.
Thank you for your comments!
When I originally wrote this, nearly two years ago, I replaced
'ejaculate' with "emulate" hoping the reader will match or surpass
this experience.
Having already used "detonate" in line three, it (ejaculate) seemed redundant.
Thank you for your comments!
Anonymous
10th Mar 2014 3:21am
Have mercy!! Like the first one wasn't hot enough. Mmmmmm! You got it rockin tonight. :)
10th Mar 2014 3:29am
