Words (Means of Survival І )

amazing

I have read most of your works related to your dearest. It is one of those exceptions and now I am getting another part of writing from you which is I think new to me and I find it an awesome masterpiece. Believe me I am not at all being too kind in doing so but that I am not having words enough for your acclaim because you steal words so perfectly. This is your best piece so far:-)

im grateful to every single one of you!
thanks a lot for your kind feedback it means more than anything :))

I LUV IT

I would recommend removing the "I" before "will" in the last line to make it more punchy, and capitalising the "i" after because in the preceeding one, but other than that this is fantastic. I mean it's a fucking masterpiece Opheliac. One of your most focused and insightful pieces. It sort of reminds me of "Words" by Anne Sexton: http://giron.itgo.com/Words.htm

Oups i missed capitalising that I but thanks for the recommendation.
thanks again for your lovely words ^^
i'll make sure to read the poem

very concise.
one can say a lot of things in only a few words.