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'Happy HO Lucky'
She claimed to love him
but love... she did not
she professed her loyality
yet, the scent of another
made her hot...
Fickle dee, fickle dum
it looks like that flip flop has begun
again, n' again it'll never end
so why try to take love for a spin?
She stoked the flames of his desire
often proclaimed burned by his fire
Though truth in little to no time would tell...
she was just a bouncing ball,
bouncing on to the next one to fall...
A victim, she picked him to charm,
all while alleging
the heart is in no harm...
She claimed to love him, always
want him near...
fact of the matter is
she loved him NOT by her actions
a quick exit, poof! gone...n' now
that heart suffers it's latest fatal tear...
but love... she did not
she professed her loyality
yet, the scent of another
made her hot...
Fickle dee, fickle dum
it looks like that flip flop has begun
again, n' again it'll never end
so why try to take love for a spin?
She stoked the flames of his desire
often proclaimed burned by his fire
Though truth in little to no time would tell...
she was just a bouncing ball,
bouncing on to the next one to fall...
A victim, she picked him to charm,
all while alleging
the heart is in no harm...
She claimed to love him, always
want him near...
fact of the matter is
she loved him NOT by her actions
a quick exit, poof! gone...n' now
that heart suffers it's latest fatal tear...
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4th Mar 2014 2:46pm
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4th Mar 2014 3:08pm
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4th Mar 2014 3:13pm
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2014 3:27pm
This is awesome vent. I thought I was the only one to ever use "flip flop". Enjoyed this very much. You express yourself well being so mad. :)
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4th Mar 2014 3:47pm
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4th Mar 2014 3:57pm
Woe, to the fickle heart and its jaded path of destruction ... much peace to you :)
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4th Mar 2014 4:04pm
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4th Mar 2014 4:44pm
a quick exit, poof! gone...n' now
that heart suffers it's latest fatal tear...
great ending :)
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4th Mar 2014 8:52pm
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4th Mar 2014 5:10pm
#laughs# so I wanet to quote
And ended up quotin the whole piece
Reading the piece was worth my time
And ended up quotin the whole piece
Reading the piece was worth my time
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4th Mar 2014 8:53pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Mar 2014 6:42pm
4th Mar 2014 6:41pm
It's so hard to determine the sound of a heartbeat from a bouncing ball...until the ball is caught in the action...
kick her off...you don't need her.
hugs to ya.
kick her off...you don't need her.
hugs to ya.
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4th Mar 2014 9:26pm
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5th Mar 2014 9:17am
Yes, the female can be just as deadly as the male. Great stuff Poetikmind. :)
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5th Mar 2014 1:51pm
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7th Mar 2014 1:21am
...charming deception? She's a HO, huh? lol...
Creative ink poe, executed amazingly...xo
Creative ink poe, executed amazingly...xo
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re: Re: 'Happy HO Lucky'
7th Mar 2014 5:00am
I plead the fifth lol... N I'm thrilled you liked it my dear!
Always grateful for your support :)
Always grateful for your support :)
Re: 'Happy HO Lucky'
7th Mar 2014 7:56pm
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7th Mar 2014 9:44pm
:) made me laugh! very well put.. adding to my reading list now!! *snap snap snap*
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7th Mar 2014 10:34pm
Oh laughing at my pain huh?? lol well heck at least you liked it! :) appreciate you lady :)