A Lonely Road To Hell

sometimes its better to confront your deamons then to just ignore them. and this poem is realy good i like it. you do what some people can not and that is something to be proud of :)

You are a very wise Soul, Night angel, and thank you so much. Many look for labels, a religion, a social group, an attitude (mostly the tough guy/gal) etc etc in an attempt to define who we are. The only thing that truly define us...are our choices :)

Excellent write!  Great self introspection into the dark side of the "id"…those instincts and energies that dwell within the abyss of black and bloody terror.

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And it's such a fascinating place...the inner abyss...;)
Thank you so much for your words my friend :)  

Inner demons are like fat easy to gain but it takes work to keep them tamed most defiantly defined by choices.
great write

and great and wise words, lol demons are indeed like fat...but you know..sometimes i like to just let them rampage, have some infernal fun...like being already a bit overweight and say wth and go order a damn pizza and thoroughly enjoy it muahaha
thank you for commenting :)

Welcome to DU! This poem is wild. So expressive in self anguish and judgment. Very visual. Luv it! :)

thank you ! :)

this is genuine...well written

Thank you my friend :)

I find myself wanting to prey on the very first works that people write~ You shall not be an exception, my friend~

This poem worked well with the content that it is displayed with. Although the errors and such things might not have been intentional (uncapitalized wording and lack of punctuation)they play into the rough nature of what the poem tells the story of~

Choppy, but yet smooth and to the point~

Where some poetry may move and form its words to throw out a clearer message, this helps the performance on its own~

Dealing with ones 'demons' isn't a smooth and simple or easy process~

The title also has a grey-effect that I find rather stimulating and inspiring~ Not 'grey' as in boring, but more like a solemn, empty place.

Calm~

This reminded me to be inspired when I had forgotten what inspiration was~

Thank you~