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Plea
You're giving up on love
you're giving up on yourself
you're giving up on hope.
You're telling me these things,
like you want to forever sleep.
She has erased all your memories
leaving only me with our history.
I'm only a shell to wrap around
all the feeling that we have found,
together and apart
in the light and in the dark.
Now I just want to die
sink like the a ship in the sea
and run away from all the lies.
you're giving up on yourself
you're giving up on hope.
You're telling me these things,
like you want to forever sleep.
She has erased all your memories
leaving only me with our history.
I'm only a shell to wrap around
all the feeling that we have found,
together and apart
in the light and in the dark.
Now I just want to die
sink like the a ship in the sea
and run away from all the lies.
Published 26th Feb 2014
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28th Feb 2014 9:53pm
There is pain here in this.
Best lines for me:
"She has erased all your memories
leaving only me with our history.
I'm only a shell to wrap around
all the feeling that we have found"
Best lines for me:
"She has erased all your memories
leaving only me with our history.
I'm only a shell to wrap around
all the feeling that we have found"
28th Feb 2014 11:47pm
It's a painful inspiration. I like those lines too...despite the sadness that they hold. Thanks for the comment:)
