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Observational Poems
The Cold
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The Cold
I think we are the
snow;
a temporary beauty
that is
too fragile
to be so
profound.
Written by
WordsUnspoken
(lucifersteeth)
Published
26th Feb 2014
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Re: The Cold
Anonymous
26th Feb 2014 1:52pm
Very direct and an excellent metaphor. Well said!
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Re: The Cold
Atakti
26th Feb 2014 4:24pm
I like this... not sure of the italics, but yeah, I like this a lot.
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Re: The Cold
katzmalkav
(Malki)
26th Feb 2014 9:48pm
Great as always. You say alot with very little ink.
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re: Re: The Cold
WordsUnspoken
(lucifersteeth)
26th Feb 2014 10:09pm
Thank you. People seem to say that a lot, but....
I think it's that I rely too much on my audience's interpretation.
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Re: The Cold
katzmalkav
(Malki)
26th Feb 2014 10:14pm
I do the opposite, lol. I tend to say alot trying to get my point across.
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Re: The Cold
EuphoricD
27th Feb 2014 11:51am
WELL SAID .
WOW.
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