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Inside You
I want to walk naked through
your mind,
Tiptoeing around the sparks
your synapses shoots
when contact is made;
Stand behind your iris
looking through your blue eyes
to see your world,
fogging your optical lens
with my body heat;
Shimmy past your nose
Tickling your senses
with my fingertips
sneezing won’t grant you escape...
So Bless me;
Rolling in your smile...
Wetting my skin
as I escape through your
mouth when your
tongue dances with mine.
your mind,
Tiptoeing around the sparks
your synapses shoots
when contact is made;
Stand behind your iris
looking through your blue eyes
to see your world,
fogging your optical lens
with my body heat;
Shimmy past your nose
Tickling your senses
with my fingertips
sneezing won’t grant you escape...
So Bless me;
Rolling in your smile...
Wetting my skin
as I escape through your
mouth when your
tongue dances with mine.
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Re: Inside You
26th Feb 2014 12:32pm
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Re: Inside You
26th Feb 2014 12:51pm
OMG! Wow the vivid imagery is outstanding
n I totally agree with Tommie, there were definitely GREAT lines throughout this awesome ink my friend! Love it! :)
n I totally agree with Tommie, there were definitely GREAT lines throughout this awesome ink my friend! Love it! :)
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re: Re: Inside You
27th Feb 2014 4:16am
Awww you're always so kind with your words Poetikmind, I'm really touched x
Re: Inside You
26th Feb 2014 1:42pm
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27th Feb 2014 4:17am
The words tumble out, I cannot stop them.
Thank you ever so for your support and RL add xx
Thank you ever so for your support and RL add xx
Re: Inside You
26th Feb 2014 3:56pm
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26th Feb 2014 9:11pm
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re: Re: Inside You
27th Feb 2014 4:19am
I really appreciate you reading me and your comments, it's always so nice to know you're there :) x
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