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the emptyness inside me
i miss you to much words cant say
my heart breaks every time i hear your name
you treated me like a princess
but you left me like a bag of shit
the tears wont
stop the heartache wont leave
i just wish you were still with me
what did i do to get treated like this
you made me happy
you made me laugh
but now all you do is make me cry
my heart breaks every time i hear your name
you treated me like a princess
but you left me like a bag of shit
the tears wont
stop the heartache wont leave
i just wish you were still with me
what did i do to get treated like this
you made me happy
you made me laugh
but now all you do is make me cry
Published 18th Feb 2014
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18th Feb 2014 4:35pm
this is why we use this site
to sometimes get it off our chests
its like a hitting post
a little less painful too
sad write
good for getting it out there
i hope it helps by writing it out
to sometimes get it off our chests
its like a hitting post
a little less painful too
sad write
good for getting it out there
i hope it helps by writing it out
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
18th Feb 2014 4:38pm
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18th Feb 2014 4:44pm
Agreeing with TimEros..
To the point, powerful and delivers the sorrow clearly.
To the point, powerful and delivers the sorrow clearly.
18th Feb 2014 6:08pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2014 4:15am
sad ink brit break ups are never good sorry for your pain
23rd Feb 2014 2:44pm
5th Mar 2014 11:49am
Excellent work. I like your poem though I am extremely sorry for you. Move on and forget about the past. Think what is the best of you.
