Darkness of your absence (modified)

Malin you know what they say, that its the darkest just before light.  Believe in fate that things will come around.

I hope very strong, Vee, I hope! Sadness suddenly invades me, after the tumult of the fight of the daily life, and it is difficult not to sink into the blackness of its depression. Hope the light comes now! The sublim light of her smile!

Maybe next time try not to write it so funky bud! You don't need a million spaces before you write a line :)

Never heard about calligrams? I have tried to write an arrow, perhaps not so good. But it is my choice, like Guillaume Appolinaire! Sorry if you don't like it!

Oh malin, this poem echoes like the cry of a dove in a dark enormous cave.

I like how the last two lines break the rhymes.

O calligram! It is good you mentioned that I would not know too easily! Why an arrow?

My husband showed me poems that he wrote in the 60's and early 70's and they were concrete poetry, using a typewriter on paper, quite beautiful! :)

For the form, I told of an arrow, like this of Cupid, or but it could be a bird, why not a dove?

Graphic poems are multiples, I like calligram, not easy to make as Appolinaire or others. And there is also concrete and many other types.

Thank you, absinthe for your nice comment!

love is an oubliette, Malin... we dig it with our own hands and somehow find ourselves alone in the abyss, trying to claw our way into the light again.

your words here are so poignant my friend, tres belle, but painful.

These words translate my confusion and my sadness...
Thank you so much for this nice comment, Mia!