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Smells Like Summer
I woke up singing,
And the air smells like summer.
You affect me in ways,
I dont feel from any other.
I've got a butterfly net,
Knows as my stomach.
My heart beats so fast,
With your eyes as the drum stick.
I lay in bed alone,
Tears slipping from my eyes.
Suffering a broken heart,
If you ever leave my side.
[sorry its so short!]
And the air smells like summer.
You affect me in ways,
I dont feel from any other.
I've got a butterfly net,
Knows as my stomach.
My heart beats so fast,
With your eyes as the drum stick.
I lay in bed alone,
Tears slipping from my eyes.
Suffering a broken heart,
If you ever leave my side.
[sorry its so short!]
Published 25th Feb 2011
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8th Mar 2011 9:05pm
my favorite line "My heart beats so fast, with your eyes as the drumstick." i couldnt have put it any better. There is no better feeling then love. its something wonderful and hurtful but to express in words is something not many people have. I hope you never get heartbroken.
22nd Feb 2012 6:06am
Don't Be! good form, nice tempo. less is always more! sum grammar stuff in here but u will grind it out! nice read!
