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What you need.
From the back you see a black river,
It sways just above her knickers.
Her voice is but a soft whisper.
You could never JUST want to kiss her.
She deserves to be fucked,
And I will deliver.
To be tied is her favorite
The shivers never stop as she stares at me
Then I know she’s prepared for what’s next.
With her it’s just sex,
For she is the perfect body;
Plump breast, red lips, thick thighs, curvy hips.
The greatest architect could never perfect.
It sways just above her knickers.
Her voice is but a soft whisper.
You could never JUST want to kiss her.
She deserves to be fucked,
And I will deliver.
To be tied is her favorite
The shivers never stop as she stares at me
Then I know she’s prepared for what’s next.
With her it’s just sex,
For she is the perfect body;
Plump breast, red lips, thick thighs, curvy hips.
The greatest architect could never perfect.
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Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 6:44am
26 reads already. .must be under erotic
good wording
telling it in sub/dom tones
good wording
telling it in sub/dom tones
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re: Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 1:56pm
Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 11:58am
re: Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 1:57pm
It was my favorite too,
When I wrote it I knew It was finished.
I'm pretty proud of it.
xoxo
When I wrote it I knew It was finished.
I'm pretty proud of it.
xoxo
Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 11:59am
re: Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 1:58pm
Re: What you need.
14th Feb 2014 12:28pm
You described a woman that sounds pretty yummy lol
Nice imagery in this, I like it! :)
Nice imagery in this, I like it! :)
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14th Feb 2014 1:59pm
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