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Shadow in Me
Shadows freed
From suns grasp
To roam freely
Night atlas
Flowing across
Copper skin
Invading thoughts
Provoking sin
Teasing lace
On sultry curves
Tickling her neck
Of erotic nerves
Deeply penetrating
Under her skin
Poking at the fire
Burning within
Her fingers journey
To her sacred treasure
To join the shadow
By the burning fire
In and out
They dance together
Her moans calling
Oh yes Night master
Her back arches
Pleasure so intense
Her screams echo
Through the darkness
Her pleasure dripping
From her shaking core
Blackness seeping
From her shadows door
Master in black
Kisses her on the cheek
"Thanks you for this night
And the shadows that you keep"
From suns grasp
To roam freely
Night atlas
Flowing across
Copper skin
Invading thoughts
Provoking sin
Teasing lace
On sultry curves
Tickling her neck
Of erotic nerves
Deeply penetrating
Under her skin
Poking at the fire
Burning within
Her fingers journey
To her sacred treasure
To join the shadow
By the burning fire
In and out
They dance together
Her moans calling
Oh yes Night master
Her back arches
Pleasure so intense
Her screams echo
Through the darkness
Her pleasure dripping
From her shaking core
Blackness seeping
From her shadows door
Master in black
Kisses her on the cheek
"Thanks you for this night
And the shadows that you keep"
Published 11th Feb 2014
| Edited 26th Feb 2014
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11th Feb 2014 5:57pm
all that from an imagined shadow within?
such imagination. good scansion but not rooted in earth?
such imagination. good scansion but not rooted in earth?
11th Feb 2014 6:42pm
First I would like to thank you for your time, much appreciated. Not much of my poetry is rooted in my opinion, likely because as a person I am rooted, spend to much time in that world as it is. Thank you deeply for your comment.
11th Feb 2014 6:48pm
11th Feb 2014 6:53pm
Thank you Cemetery Girl, Appreciate you visiting my work and commenting, much adore
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12th Feb 2014 2:26am
It's sultry and the internal shadows are seductively erotic... I like it a lot ... & Good luck in the comp... :)
12th Feb 2014 5:03am
Thank you Blue Angel. I really enjoyed this write. As always I enjoy your comments
Anonymous
13th Feb 2014 7:38pm
As always such a beautiful write. I love the night. Such a piece if beauty and erotic feelings. Sensations flowing so sweetly. The way the piece was written draws me in. Beautiful sin my dear thank you for this tasty piece.
14th Feb 2014 3:20pm
Sweet Cassandra, so true.... There is much to be admired in the night. Thank you for enjoying my write.
Anonymous
- Edited 17th Feb 2014 5:12pm
17th Feb 2014 5:10pm
What an awesome write. So many great lines I. This one as all the rest. Very sexy and enjoyable. Mmmmmm! Good luck in the comp. :)
28th Feb 2014 5:54pm
My god flower, how did I miss the scents that brushes intoxicating fragrances upon my work.
Thank you, much appreciate your comments
Thank you, much appreciate your comments
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26th Feb 2014 12:31pm
A wonderfully written sensual and seductive write Awakenedsoul. Great rhythm and rhyme.
26th Feb 2014 1:12pm
Magdalena, thank you for reading, and comment. It is greatly appreciated as ones time is all they have and I got a moment of it.
