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The Escape
Blood
Pumping through
My veins.
Determined
To succeed.
Lungs
Clinging
To whatever air
It can get
Deep breaths
Determined
To make it.
I run
And run
I keep going
In pain
And drained from power
Determined
To get away.
Pumping through
My veins.
Determined
To succeed.
Lungs
Clinging
To whatever air
It can get
Deep breaths
Determined
To make it.
I run
And run
I keep going
In pain
And drained from power
Determined
To get away.
Published 23rd Feb 2011
| Edited 25th Feb 2011
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23rd Feb 2011 6:10pm
ummm love the poem but u made a typo and forgot an o in blood. really great job though i loves it!!!!
25th Feb 2011 9:35am
Some little mistakes have been fixed, butwasnt the typo the missing"o"? Else you need to help me xD
23rd Feb 2011 7:49pm
inspires me to take a run. if you can persevere through a strenuous workout, you can do just about anything.
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