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Love's Fool
I was such an idiot and a fool!
I opened my heart trusting your sweet words.
Never fathomed the pit of despair,
I would fall into without having you there
Who says love is for the birds?
They really must hate these air raiders.
No creature should ever experience such pain,
Being left as wounded animal bleeding and lame
Well now I know what true sorrow reveals -
Loneliness, emptiness, and sadness unmeasured.
If time is the designated healer of all wounds,
It needs to get here fast, I mean real soon!
© 2013 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved,
I opened my heart trusting your sweet words.
Never fathomed the pit of despair,
I would fall into without having you there
Who says love is for the birds?
They really must hate these air raiders.
No creature should ever experience such pain,
Being left as wounded animal bleeding and lame
Well now I know what true sorrow reveals -
Loneliness, emptiness, and sadness unmeasured.
If time is the designated healer of all wounds,
It needs to get here fast, I mean real soon!
© 2013 The Refined Poet. All rights reserved,
Published 5th Feb 2014
| Edited 6th Feb 2014
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5th Feb 2014 3:58am
5th Feb 2014 4:31am
5th Feb 2014 6:46pm
*now I know?
It's a delightful read with very recognizable features by the way.
It's a delightful read with very recognizable features by the way.
6th Aug 2014 10:24pm
Thanks so much for the comments. I did fix that line. Appreciate it as always.
~TRP~
~TRP~
24th Aug 2014 3:05am
love this poem and totlly agree with this line... it need to hurry up :)
If time is the designated healer of all wounds,
It needs to get here fast, I mean real soon!
If time is the designated healer of all wounds,
It needs to get here fast, I mean real soon!
10th Feb 2015 10:37pm
