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Sleep
I fell asleep laying on you,
a silly thing for a girl like me to do
it caught you by surprise too...
The silence was deafening,
a beautiful respite I found
only your heartbeat for sound...
Just being you, outshining the darkness,
safe arms wrapped around me tight
I slept without 'them' tonight...
a silly thing for a girl like me to do
it caught you by surprise too...
The silence was deafening,
a beautiful respite I found
only your heartbeat for sound...
Just being you, outshining the darkness,
safe arms wrapped around me tight
I slept without 'them' tonight...
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Re: Sleep
3rd Feb 2014 3:26am
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3rd Feb 2014 7:31am
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3rd Feb 2014 7:31am
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2014 7:22am
good poem; and yes it is good to fall asleep in your lover's arms
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3rd Feb 2014 7:32am
Re: Sleep
4th Feb 2014 2:05am
I always stay awake if I'm next to someone, touching them, holding...impossible to sleep. I always wonder how anyone else does it.
I read your poems and marvel at what other people can do: so simple yet impossible for me. x
I read your poems and marvel at what other people can do: so simple yet impossible for me. x
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re: Re: Sleep
4th Feb 2014 2:58am
Hey Swiss, thank you for reading.
I'm not broken (first) and taken (second) with sleep being the third installment; if read like this it shows why falling asleep wrapped up with him means so much to me; he's not evil.
I love reading your comments and reflections x
I'm not broken (first) and taken (second) with sleep being the third installment; if read like this it shows why falling asleep wrapped up with him means so much to me; he's not evil.
I love reading your comments and reflections x