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How Great It Felt
I felt the touch, it came quite close.
How great it felt, I never knew.
The kiss to my lips, the barrel so cold.
My last words, the trigger pulled.
"good bye"
Infatued with going all the way
But everytime, I swear I'm not ready.
I've kissed her a few times
and the breathing gets quite heavy.
So, I sit back and watch my friends get theres.
I sit back, and break down and cry.
I'm the only virgin to it.
Only soon, I will die.[/font]
How great it felt, I never knew.
The kiss to my lips, the barrel so cold.
My last words, the trigger pulled.
"good bye"
Infatued with going all the way
But everytime, I swear I'm not ready.
I've kissed her a few times
and the breathing gets quite heavy.
So, I sit back and watch my friends get theres.
I sit back, and break down and cry.
I'm the only virgin to it.
Only soon, I will die.[/font]
Published 19th Feb 2011
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20th Feb 2011 3:40am
i love this. this gives me goosebumps and makes me really feel your emotions. this has to be my favorite of the month, i hope to hear more
30th Mar 2011 3:53pm
Thank you. I intend to write more, just been having some real writers block latley.
5th Oct 2012 8:32am
