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The Hell I Fear
I will not buy into your mindless way of thinking!
Speak on behalf of your book,
And tell me how I should punish myself for being human.
Its not Hell I fear
Because I'm already there.
You piece of shit!
You and your clones prosecute me
for not conforming into your group.
It makes me sick at how blind
you can be.
Look at this world,
Then show me how much your God really cares
Realise how small you are!
Realise that we do not need saving!
Realise that if there was a God,
He obviously wouldn't waste his time with an ignorant race like this.
Speak on behalf of your book,
And tell me how I should punish myself for being human.
Its not Hell I fear
Because I'm already there.
You piece of shit!
You and your clones prosecute me
for not conforming into your group.
It makes me sick at how blind
you can be.
Look at this world,
Then show me how much your God really cares
Realise how small you are!
Realise that we do not need saving!
Realise that if there was a God,
He obviously wouldn't waste his time with an ignorant race like this.
Published 28th Jan 2014
| Edited 30th Jan 2014
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28th Jan 2014 7:57pm
Great write man. I think it would have more impact if you changed the last line of the second stanza to "Then show me how much your God really cares." That's if I was writing it though so... Great, true write.
