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it hurts
Its dark
Its cold
No more
No hold
I hurt
Its real
Not here
No feel
This pain
I fear
The end
Its near
No light
I run
No sound
Im done
Its cold
No more
No hold
I hurt
Its real
Not here
No feel
This pain
I fear
The end
Its near
No light
I run
No sound
Im done
Published 25th Jan 2014
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26th Jan 2014 8:06am
aahh, i can feel the sentiment pulsating from this piece. simple yet quenching, thankyou.
only thing is maybe it ends a bit to abruptly, for me. i'd like it to go longer
only thing is maybe it ends a bit to abruptly, for me. i'd like it to go longer
