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Watching You
I like to watch you
Falling asleep
After our
passion has spoken
You lie on your side
The covers half off
Wearing nothing
but a sweet smile
The house is quiet
The day has been stripped away
And your beauty is what remains
Filling me with thoughts
of tomorrow .....
Falling asleep
After our
passion has spoken
You lie on your side
The covers half off
Wearing nothing
but a sweet smile
The house is quiet
The day has been stripped away
And your beauty is what remains
Filling me with thoughts
of tomorrow .....
Published 25th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2014 3:23pm
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25th Jan 2014 4:19pm
25th Jan 2014 5:31pm
....the lingering seduction of beautiful love making, always taint our thoughts for days... :)
Sensual ink hon....Xo
Sensual ink hon....Xo
25th Jan 2014 5:32pm
25th Jan 2014 6:14pm
It feels like every word in this one is necessary; it all works to perfection. You and Rain touch romantic realms I'll never reach, yet I appreciate the view so very much!!!
25th Jan 2014 6:29pm
Thank J
Rain is in a league by herself but I've learned from reading her. She is amazing.
Rain is in a league by herself but I've learned from reading her. She is amazing.
Anonymous
26th Jan 2014 00:24am
What a lovely romantic poem, absolutely timeless!
26th Jan 2014 00:42am
26th Jan 2014 2:40pm
Oh wow... This piece fills me with warmth... I cannot help but read over and over. Beautiful words xx
26th Jan 2014 2:45pm
27th Jan 2014 1:47pm
Dedicating the last thought of the day and the first one of the new day to someone you've just made love to, that must be love. Enjoyed, Speak.
27th Jan 2014 1:56pm
Thanks Miss Chi
Is it real, is it fantasy, is it a poem ?
Either way, your thoughts please me.
xx
Is it real, is it fantasy, is it a poem ?
Either way, your thoughts please me.
xx
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