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Fragrance of What?
fragrance, The smell of nothing
I've come and gone
I'm still learning The smiles of yesterday
Now are fake
I havent seen yet
a smile for today But who knows
Maybe it will come
Who knows
Maybe, I'm wrong Wouldn't be the first
Its happend before
Just whats different?
Are you sure?
We call out on God
When we're in need
We swear against him
When we are weak
Sad, Sad, We believe what we're told
Nobody questions anything
Believe it without a second thought
Open mindedness is what I Was taught
But- Hey...
Who am I to question it?
I'm just another one who isnt above it[/font]
I've come and gone
I'm still learning The smiles of yesterday
Now are fake
I havent seen yet
a smile for today But who knows
Maybe it will come
Who knows
Maybe, I'm wrong Wouldn't be the first
Its happend before
Just whats different?
Are you sure?
We call out on God
When we're in need
We swear against him
When we are weak
Sad, Sad, We believe what we're told
Nobody questions anything
Believe it without a second thought
Open mindedness is what I Was taught
But- Hey...
Who am I to question it?
I'm just another one who isnt above it[/font]
Published 17th Feb 2011
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17th Feb 2011 6:58pm
18th Feb 2011 1:45pm
17th Feb 2011 8:20pm
One thing that caught my eye was the phrase "We call out on God"... Should that be "to God"? Or "towards God", to sound more contradictory of "against him" two lines down?
18th Feb 2011 1:44pm
I've noticed something with people. God is great when their life is good, or the really want something. when their life sucks or they didnt get what they want, they curse his name. that was the line.
29th Jan 2012 7:53pm
