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Delicious
Surviving the red-lit lethargic traffic
You still came
and weren't intense nasty;
so happy to see each other
despite the rain...
Stealing kisses while
warming up at the wine bar,
listening to your stories
my stories
giggling so...
Wet with the droplets
that seem so incessant in falling.
Seated for food
Your warm hands with mine,
held, heart-skipping stares
drinking each other in.
You sprinkle the finest of
sincere words that I blush receiving...
I love how you are captivated
Letting me uncoil, delighted
receiving your laughter.
The stars danced over the moon
strolling by the river
time begging to escape...
I didn't heed your warning
but still you followed me
to the petrol station
in case I didn't make it
and filled my car for me;
All the while
Encircling my waist
Chastising my lips
With yours
I guess this is
what makes you so
delicious...
You still came
and weren't intense nasty;
so happy to see each other
despite the rain...
Stealing kisses while
warming up at the wine bar,
listening to your stories
my stories
giggling so...
Wet with the droplets
that seem so incessant in falling.
Seated for food
Your warm hands with mine,
held, heart-skipping stares
drinking each other in.
You sprinkle the finest of
sincere words that I blush receiving...
I love how you are captivated
Letting me uncoil, delighted
receiving your laughter.
The stars danced over the moon
strolling by the river
time begging to escape...
I didn't heed your warning
but still you followed me
to the petrol station
in case I didn't make it
and filled my car for me;
All the while
Encircling my waist
Chastising my lips
With yours
I guess this is
what makes you so
delicious...
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Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 4:53am
Heartfelt slice of life romantic read.
Heart is our new rising STAR on DUP
Well done, awesome flow
xo
Heart is our new rising STAR on DUP
Well done, awesome flow
xo
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re: Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 11:25am
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24th Jan 2014 6:43am
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24th Jan 2014 11:26am
Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 7:28am
A perfect illustration of true affection! I love this passage:
"love how you are captivated
Letting me uncoil"
Well done, Heart!
"love how you are captivated
Letting me uncoil"
Well done, Heart!
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re: Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 11:27am
Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 12:04pm
I've never had this kind of experience. Your poem offers me a view...what it would be like from both sides of the table. Thank you
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re: Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 1:27pm
Thank you Swiss... Please know that before this interesting creature, my experiences were not so dimentional... Just blessed. I love your time and comments, thank you x
Re: Delicious
24th Jan 2014 7:18pm
Oh wow! How delicious this ink is...
"Wet with the droplets
that seem so incessant in falling."<--gorgeous lines, in a gorgeous piece.
Thanks for sharing such beauty with us...Xo
"Wet with the droplets
that seem so incessant in falling."<--gorgeous lines, in a gorgeous piece.
Thanks for sharing such beauty with us...Xo
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re: Re: Delicious
28th Jan 2014 12:18pm
Thank you for reading Rain...
It wasn't heavy falls... Just weather you could comfortably stand in (our summer here). x
It wasn't heavy falls... Just weather you could comfortably stand in (our summer here). x
Re: Delicious
25th Jan 2014 11:57pm
Ooh I'm a sucker for love poetry and this is awesome sauce Heart of Glass outstanding I don't have a fav line I love this entirely beautiful wow
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re: Re: Delicious
28th Jan 2014 12:20pm
Awww thank you... I'm a big softy at heart and he just brings it out in me just by being him x
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re: Re: Delicious
28th Jan 2014 12:22pm
Wow, thank you for such keen interest and picking your favourite parts, I enjoy your feedback. More so, thank you for taking the time to do so x
Re: Delicious
28th Jan 2014 11:47am
Wow the imagery of this is outstanding
n the romanticism is sigh worthy! Nice work
my sweet Heart :)
n the romanticism is sigh worthy! Nice work
my sweet Heart :)
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re: Re: Delicious
28th Jan 2014 12:23pm
You make me blush... Thank you for always reading and your kind words x