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Come On Over........
"...our love is so beautifully messy" : )
“....I wanna' make beautiful love to you boy “
So intense are the words....
....that I won't write
and you won't read
because they won't scratch the surface
won't quench the need ….
….so come on over
Let me see "how deep is your love"
let me spill my ink all over your soul
You are my kindred spirit, don't you know?
We share the gift of “life's bright colors”
“Lovin', touchin', squeezin' each other”
feeling my love from the inside out.....
...I wanna' make beautiful love to you girl
my "honey love"
Let me draw a sweet harvest
from your golden hive
drawing from my tap
pressed deep inside
“Drops Of Jupiter”
Wet my lips
with sticky drips of
“honey do....”
….does my lovin' move you?
This addiction I have to your
strange, exotic fruit
My seductive, designer drug.....
“…...I'll never stop breaking the law for you.”
consumed by your wet words,
seduction at the whisper of ancient spells
the scents of your love
speak to burning desires
upon this bed's altar, we are
baptized by fire
until all is consumed......
…...metaphysical love riding
a paradigm shift that shakes
the room
...a gentle mephisto forcing our spirits to howl at the moon
lest we drown in warm water's falling
feeling, yielding to love's sensuous call
the strange sensation shakes us
a reshaping, becoming one in the same....
…...the deception of the calm before the storm
so my honey love,
raise the red “umbrella”
and “come on over”...
"...I don't want to wait in vain for your love"
Artistic Credit to:
Ready For The World "Come Over"
The Bee Gees "How Deep Is Your Love?"
Paul Simon "Kodachrome"
Journey "Lovin', Touchin', Squeezin'"
R. Kelly "Honey Love"
Train "Drops Of Jupiter"
Nina Simone "Strange Fruit"
Emeli Sande' "Breakin' The Law"
The Crusaders "Mephisto"
Rhianna "Umbrella"
Bob Marley "I Don't Want To Wait In Vain 4 Your Love"
“....I wanna' make beautiful love to you boy “
So intense are the words....
....that I won't write
and you won't read
because they won't scratch the surface
won't quench the need ….
….so come on over
Let me see "how deep is your love"
let me spill my ink all over your soul
You are my kindred spirit, don't you know?
We share the gift of “life's bright colors”
“Lovin', touchin', squeezin' each other”
feeling my love from the inside out.....
...I wanna' make beautiful love to you girl
my "honey love"
Let me draw a sweet harvest
from your golden hive
drawing from my tap
pressed deep inside
“Drops Of Jupiter”
Wet my lips
with sticky drips of
“honey do....”
….does my lovin' move you?
This addiction I have to your
strange, exotic fruit
My seductive, designer drug.....
“…...I'll never stop breaking the law for you.”
consumed by your wet words,
seduction at the whisper of ancient spells
the scents of your love
speak to burning desires
upon this bed's altar, we are
baptized by fire
until all is consumed......
…...metaphysical love riding
a paradigm shift that shakes
the room
...a gentle mephisto forcing our spirits to howl at the moon
lest we drown in warm water's falling
feeling, yielding to love's sensuous call
the strange sensation shakes us
a reshaping, becoming one in the same....
…...the deception of the calm before the storm
so my honey love,
raise the red “umbrella”
and “come on over”...
"...I don't want to wait in vain for your love"
Artistic Credit to:
Ready For The World "Come Over"
The Bee Gees "How Deep Is Your Love?"
Paul Simon "Kodachrome"
Journey "Lovin', Touchin', Squeezin'"
R. Kelly "Honey Love"
Train "Drops Of Jupiter"
Nina Simone "Strange Fruit"
Emeli Sande' "Breakin' The Law"
The Crusaders "Mephisto"
Rhianna "Umbrella"
Bob Marley "I Don't Want To Wait In Vain 4 Your Love"
Published 23rd Jan 2014
| Edited 24th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2014 8:53pm
Wow! I was so caught up in this. Very beautiful write and thank you for the artistic credits!
24th Jan 2014 3:26am
23rd Jan 2014 9:47pm
This is written in a style that only you can produce sir! You personalized this piece with your trademark of music; a wonderful selection I might add, but the beauty in your words and how they flow with such sweet gratification, was just brilliant! You do know how to arouse the senses seductively...
Come On Over....
#ImOnMyWay
Come On Over....
#ImOnMyWay
24th Jan 2014 3:39am
....low light, chill mode invoked, door open, welcome mat swept. Speak softly Lady Rain, Come On Over. I'm waiting 8-)
Thank you for the stimulating commentary and the invitation ; )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7q8CokWnGM
#wordsunspoken
Thank you for the stimulating commentary and the invitation ; )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7q8CokWnGM
#wordsunspoken
23rd Jan 2014 11:56pm
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26th Jan 2014 11:43pm
Thank you minister of poetic prose. I always appreciate your comments : )
1st Feb 2014 11:21pm
yummy concoction. .As usual...Your words are like diamonds..raw and rare...and very beautiful..xoxo
